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imarkanx || istvan markan 🍁's avatar

Oh you’ve embraced your inner Jude. :)

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Carlos M.'s avatar

Haha!

I'll take that as confirmation that I nailed the tone 😁

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Rebecca Watson (ReBe)'s avatar

Oh and this was fantastic!! Sorry my minds in the gutter 😅

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Carlos M.'s avatar

😂

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Rebecca Watson (ReBe)'s avatar

I’m just gonna grab my husband a skiddadle, goodnight Carlos 😉😉

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Carlos M.'s avatar

Perfect 😉👌

Enjoy 😊

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Cailin & Eirian's avatar

I loved it like I said it's beautiful

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Cailin & Eirian's avatar

I loved this it's beautiful

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Carlos M.'s avatar

Thank you so much!

I wanted to explore passion and desire beyond the big proclamations of some tropes.

I'm glad you liked it. 😊

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The Blossoming Bean's avatar

Love the delicate dance of tenderness and dominance.

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Carlos M.'s avatar

Thank you! If you loved it, it means I nailed the tone I was going for. 😊

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Darkly Dreaming Klar Nett's avatar

Thank you for accepting my challenge Carlos! You found the perfect balance between the love and possession, toxicity and beauty 😍

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Carlos M.'s avatar

Thanks for trusting me with the challenge!

It was a great idea for a poem. 😊

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Rea de Miranda's avatar

Oh my God! 🤍

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Carlos M.'s avatar

Oh I just realized my first comment had a bunch of words missing!

I was going to say "Thanks for reading and commenting on my post, Rea" 😅

That's what happens when you respond so early in the morning. 🫣

I'm sorry for the slip 😅

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Rea de Miranda's avatar

No worries! I know I'm not yours. 😁

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Carlos M.'s avatar

Hahaha, still.

Thanks again. 😊

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Carlos M.'s avatar

Thanks for reading my Rea. 😊🙂‍↕️

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